The most memorable experience of I, is watching the superbike race in Sentul circuit last month with my friend. I’m very interest with this sport. In this race I have favourite rider, that’s Doni tata. He is cool and talented racer. I hope he will shine of Indonesia in international with his victory. After I bought the ticket, I enter and looking the empty seat then I get it in a front, I can easy to see and easy to take some pictures and video of race. The race is being awesome !, many of racer crash in a bend and a lot of racer have overtaking battle for get good sequence. The winner of this race is Doni tata, I’m very glad to see he in a top of podium and celebrate with crew and absolutely with his big fans. After that he go down to meet his fans, and also I go there say for his victory and take some picture with him. I don’t believed, that’s like a dream to see my favourite racer. I’m very happy. After that I back to home with feeling happy.
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It's good u enclose the picts here to support ur writing. It will make readers more interested in reading ur writing. Why don't u put the remark too on the TS and CS? Well, Jo, as I told u in the class, one thing u have to keep in mind if u wanna have a well-written paragraph is to make it coherence. It is essential to make ur writing more systematically written. U may use the transition signals to connect each supporting sentence. Paying attention to ur grammar is also important to avoid misinterpretation once readers finish reading ur composition.
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